Carleton University

School of Journalism and Communication

JOURNALISM 2201B: FUNDAMENTALS OF RPEORTING
Winter Term: Thursdays 11:30-5:30 (Class time 12-3 p.m. unless otherwise announced)

Rm 347 St. Pat's

Instructor: David McKie

1-613-288-6523 (office)

1-613-290-7380 (cell)
1-613-290-7380 (fax)
David_mckie@cbc.ca

Course Description: The purpose of this course is to introduce you to the basic skills required to gather and present information as a journalist. These skills are the cornerstone of journalism in any medium, be it print, radio, television, the web.

Particular emphasis will be placed on three important requirements in all journalistic work: precision, clarity and connection with the audience. It will also be important for us understand why and how.

Course work will include analyzing examples of other people's journalism and completing writing and reporting assignments during and outside of class. Students who successfully complete this course should be able to:

" identify and focus news story ideas;
" gather accurate information for journalistic reports using a wide range of techniques;
" write clear and precise journalistic reports in a variety of forms;

"think critically about the stories we read, hear and see.

Texts and Equipment: It is essential that you keep up with the news and consume lots of good, solid journalism. So consider the news media your most important required text. Read at least one newspaper every day (the Globe & Mail and/or National Post for Canadian and international news, and the Ottawa Citizen or the Ottawa Sun for local news), listen to CBC Radio News (World Report at the top of the hour between 6-9 a.m. local news at the bottom of the house during the same time period, and The World at Six from 6:00-6:30 p.m.), and watch CBC-TV's The National, The CTV National News or Global National in the evening. Use the web (the home of breaking news) to view how news outlets across the country and abroad portray the news and how it's presented by new media types.

Also required are the second edition of The Canadian Reporter: News Writing and Reporting by Catherine McKercher and Carman Cumming (Harcourt Brace, Toronto; 1998) and The Canadian Press Stylebook (the 14th or 15th editions) and CP Caps and Spelling (preferably the 18th edition). You should also carry (and use!) a pocket dictionary, such as the mini-Oxford. A big dictionary such as The Canadian Oxford Dictionary is also extremely valuable to a writer. I'll also be recommending other books that aren't required reading but may be worth buying, borrowing from the library, or adding to your wish-list for birthdays or other loot-collecting opportunities in the near or distant future. Professionals are expected to be familiar with the literature of their field, so now is a good time to begin building your library.
You'll also need a portable voice recorder for some assignments. Any basic one will do for this course, but anyone who intends to buy a new one may wish to get the sort you'll need for radio courses in third and fourth years. The School's audio technician, Mark Valcour, will advise us on recommended models and can tell you if one you already have will be suitable.

Course Calendar:

Jan. 7 Back to the Basics: A recap of the roles of news and journalists in the community; "news values"; and what a "story": is made of. We'll discuss using primary and secondary sources and begin reviewing good interviewing techniques.
[Reading : Canadian Reporter(2nd edition)-3, CR-4 and CR5, pg. 45-128]

Articles on Eric Czapnik: one, two

Court documents: one, two, three

Chronology

Follow-up artricle on Czapnik

Additional reading: Chapter 8 of Digging Deeper; Computer-Assisted Reporting chapter 9

Jan. 14 Using "story": On the street and at the keyboard Applying the understanding of the elements of a story to gathering and presenting journalistic material, with an eye on news features. We will review the previous week's lessons on sources and interviewing, and then move to writing.

Stephen Harper interview on The National

Transcript of Harper interview

Interviewing tipsheet

New York Times article

Reading: CP syle guide highlights

Additional reading material: Don Gibb's writing column for Media magazine's Fall 2009 edition; Use those periods. Don Gibb Media magazine column; Computer-Assisted Reporting chapter 9

Jan. 21 Finding and Focusing Feature Ideas: How to go from an initial interview to an indepth look at a specific, timely, interesting issue...and sell it!. [Reading: CR, pg.351-364]

For tips on evaluating Web sites, please click here

Additional reference: We'll be using many references from a book by Carl Sessions Stepp called Writing as Craft and Magic.

Examples of stories with well-crafted leads.

Jan 28 Postmortem on the interview assignment.

The story behind numbers: Numbers are like facts: they can be manipluated. And the sad part is, journalists are willing participants in the game of spin and obfuscation. We'll learn how to distinguish the numbers from the spin, which includes doing the math yourself.

Ottawa's crime statistics

PDF cracking software: PDF Text Reader

Population estimates by sub-area and the city of Ottawa

Population estimates by ward

Crimes and offences (Statcan summary tables that break crimes down by province and territories)
http://cansim2.statcan.gc.ca/cgi-win/cnsmcgi.pgm?Lang=E&SP_Action=Result&SP_ID=2102&SP_TYP=5&SP_Sort=1&SP_Portal=2

Reading: CR, pg. 330-331

Numeracy tutorial

Feb. 4 Do the Math!: We'll begin the class with a brief discussion about ethics. Please see the links posted below. Then we'll continue with the crime data, getting it into shape so that we can mine the numbers for stories about the prevalence of problems such as assault, fraud and break and enter in certain areas of town.

Citizen article on break and enter

Population statistics by ward

Ethics: Article one: Article two

Additional material: Numeracy tutorial part 1 ; Math quiz

Crime story assignment Q and A

Feb. 11 A disussion about the importance of focusing a story. How is it done? What are the key elements? Answering the question so what? Different kinds of stories: news; profiles; features.
Putting the Pieces together: Narrative line and the synthesis of detail in long-form feature writing.[Review CR, pg 351-364]

My notes on focusing stories

Additional reading: Writing as Craft and Magic.

The Globe and Mail article on Colonel Russell Williams

The Ottawa Citizen article on safe driving.

Feb. 18 Study break.

Feb. 25 Postmortem for numbers assignment. Numbers test. Discussion of newsroom sessions. We will also choose the news teams , copy editors and assignment editors, and then discuss the roles for the newsroom days beginning on March 10.

Please click here for the Excel workbook we'll use for the test.

[Reading: CP, pg. 150-159, CR-Appendix A pg. 395-417]

Don Gibb's writing columns for Media magazine: part one; part two

Mar 4 Newsroom Prep: Newsroom roles, responsibilities and mechanics; organization for the next three weeks. [Readings for Newsroom period: Review CP, pg. 144-149, CR-7, pg 155-177, and CR-8, pg. 179-198]

Mar 11 Newsroom day

Please click here for the team members and their jobs for this day.

Newspaper for Team One

Newspaper for Team Two

For a postmortem of the two publications, please click here

Mar 18 Newsroom day

Please click here for the team members and their jobs for this day.

Newspaper for Team One

Newspaper for Team Two

Feedback

Mar 24 Newsroom day

Newspaper for Team One

Newspaper for Team Two

April 1

The second -- and last! -- in-class numbers test. Please click here to obtain the Excel workbook.

Feedback from the last week's newsroom day.

A discussion of the year and what lies ahead.

Evaluation

This course does NOT involve exams. Your grade for this term of JOUR 2201 will be based on the assignments outlined below. Your FINAL grade for JOUR 2201 will be equal, at least, to the average of your numeric grade points for the Fall and Winter terms. A passing grade for this course is a C. There will be no supplemental exam in either term of the course or for the course as a whole. Standing in a course is determined by the course instructors subject to the approval of the Faculty Dean. This means that grades submitted by an instructor may be subject to revision. No grades are final until they have been approved by the Dean.

Grading Procedures:

This is a professional school and students will be held to professional standards in both assignments and conduct. Journalistic work will be graded based on its focus, newsworthiness, originality, clarity, precision, and ability to connect with the audience. Rules for copy layout and writing style are to be strictly followed; deviations from proper layout and style will be considered equivalent to errors of fact and marked accordingly.

Grades for journalistic writing will combine two considerations: Reporting and Presentation. Marks for reporting will be awarded based on the strength of the story idea, difficulties overcome in gathering the information, and the precise accuracy of all details in the story. Marks for presentation will be awarded for strict adherence to style and format, clarity and effectiveness of the storytelling, proper and clear attribution, and creative use of description and quotation. Where the relative quality of reporting and presentation vary significantly, I'll give you a separate grade for each and your final grade for the assignment will be an average of the two.

To earn an A range grade, journalistic work must be newsworthy, complete, well-written, original and precise in both fact and style, ready to go to an audience with little or no editing. Good journalistic writing captures both the facts of a story and a sense of the setting and people involved. Creativity is no substitute for accuracy or completeness - but creative, sensitive writing can elevate routine news to a kind of art form. An F will go to assignments that miss deadlines (see below), contain significant errors of fact, misspell names of a people or places, don't address the assignment as given, or seriously violate the School's Ethics and Professional Standards.

A request to have the grade for an assignment reviewed must be made within two weeks of you getting the assignment back. The Undergraduate Calendar's section on Academic Regulations of the University also outlines the procedure for formal appeals on assignment or course grades.

Please note: When a maximum and minimum length is specified for an assignment, the writing MUST be double-spaced with page margins that are one inch on all four sides, and the type size used must be 12pt. Variations are not acceptable. I require that assignments are emailed as Word documents. I will be edit them electronically, and return them as Word files.

Deadlines, Extensions, Exemptions, Accommodations and Offences:

All journalism is based on deadlines. Miss one once you are a working reporter and you'll let down your audience, hurt your employer's credibility, embarrass yourself…and maybe even lose your job! Here, you'll lose marks. You are to email assignments before class. A late assignment gets an F.

There will be NO extensions on deadlines. In the case of genuine and extreme personal or family emergencies, you may be exempted from an assignment but you should contact me about the emergency BEFORE the deadline unless absolutely impossible. If illness or injury makes it difficult for you to work, you should see a doctor. Bring me a doctor's note and we can rearrange workload as required. A problem that will affect more than one assignment must be discussed with the undergraduate supervisor, Klaus Pohle.

Learning Accommodation: Students with disabilities requiring academic accommodations in this course must register with the Paul Menton Centre (PMC) for Students with Disabilities for a formal evaluation of disability-related needs. Registered PMC students are required to contact the centre, 623-520-6608, every term to ensure they have a letter of accommodation for instructors. After registering with the PMC, discuss your needs with me in order to make the necessary arrangements as early in the term as possible.

Other Academic Accommodation: You may need special arrangements to meet your academic obligations during the term because of disability, pregnancy or religious obligations. Please review the course outline promptly and write to me with any requests for academic accommodation during the first two weeks of class, or as soon as possible after the need for accommodation is known to exist. It takes time to review and consider each request, and to arrange for accommodations where appropriate.

Please make sure you respect these timelines, particularly for in-class tests and due dates. You can visit the Equity Services website to view the policies and to obtain more detailed information on academic accommodation at: http://carleton.ca/equity/accommodation

PLEASE NOTE: Students who fake any part of their stories or research, plagiarize anyone else's work, or otherwise cheat on their assignments will get MORE than just a failing grade. They will be dealt with according to the university's rules for Academic Integrity. Please see the Undergraduate Calendar's section on Academic Regulations of the University for an explanation of what this means. (http://www.carleton.ca/cuuc/)

 
Assignments and Deadlines Percent
Quizzes: there will be three quizzes during the term that will deal with stories making news or material that we've covered during the course or in class readings. Each quiz will be graded out of five marks. I will take the two best results to give you a final mark out of ten. 10%

Assignment#1: (Jan. 7) Write a news story based on an idea or event that you will cover during the week. There will be two parts to the assignment: one, a focus statement -- no longer than three sentences -- and brief explanation -- no longer than 100 words -- of why the idea or event qualifies as news; two, a 400-word story. Both parts must be in the same Word document. Due: Thurs., Jan.14 before class.

NOTE: THIS ASSIGNMENT, ALONG WITH ALL THE OTHERS IS TO BE EMAILED TO THE ADDRESS AT THE TOP OF THE SYLLABUS. NO PAPER, PLEASE!

5%
Assignment #2: (Jan. 14) Select a person you do not know well, who is different from you in signficant ways, and who does something interesting or well; interview this person and transcribe the interview, which must be no longer than 15 minutes. Then introduce the person in a vivid, 400-word article, strategically using direct quotes, which can be no longer than three sentences. You will be required to submit two Word documents: the first, a transcription of the 15-minute interview; the second, the story along with a focus statement. Due: Thurs., Jan. 21, before class. 10%
Assignment #3: (Jan. 21) Write a 400-word formal "pitch" memo to your editor proposing a feature story idea linked to your interview in Assignment #2. Explain the narrowly focused issue you've chosen, why it's important now, who you plan to talk to (specific names and titles), and any interesting approaches you may take in writing the piece. Due: Feb. 4 before class 5%
Assignment #4: (Jan. 28) Consider the person you interviewed in Assignment #2 and your feature idea, and do something that gives you special insights into the isue and people involved in it; write a 400-word narrative side-bar describing what you did and what you learned. Due: Feb. 4 before class. WARNING! don't leave this until the last few days. 5%

Assignment #5: (Jan 28. 5) Using the skills -- cracking pdfs and Excel -- we've learned in class, use the Ottawa police force's crime statistics to find a story. Once you have identified a trend, write a story with at least one interview from someone who has either been affected by the crime or who has knowledge of the category of the kind of crime you're researching. The interview should be in person. You're to exercise your interviewing skills, powers of observation, attention to detail and context. Please do not interview the police, as I don't want the force inundated with calls. Instead, I just need a nutgraph that puts the crime you're researching into context. For instance, is it on the rise? How does it compare to other wards? How does it compare to the national average or provincial average? In short, there has to be something about the trend that makes it newsworthy. You are to submit a Word document with a 600-word limit. You'll be deducted half a mark for going over the word count. You are also to submit an Excel file with the table that illustrates your trend. Due: February 11 before class

10%
Assignment #6: (Feb. 4) Integrate the material gathered in your original profile, follow-up interviews and other research into a major, 12-hundred word feature that explores a narrowly focused issue of current interest. Due: Mar. 11 before class 20%
Assignments #7 and #8: Complete an in-class test involving reporting numbers (Feb. 25) and an in-class style editing test (Mar. 3)

5%x2

Total for assignments: 10%

Assignments #9, 10 and 11:(Mar. 10, 17 and 24) Participate as assigned in three Newsroom exercises, rotating through a turn as an editor. As a reporter, you will bring in a story to be edited for publication, and will then chase a same-day story to be researched and written before the end of the class. You'll also submit a weekly "work report" e-mail describing what you did, why you did it, and what you learned from the experience. Due dates/times as assigned Desk: 5% Stories: 5%x2 Same Day: 5%: Total for assignments: 20%
Participation/professional conduct: For constructive participation and professionalism displayed throughout the term. 5%

Biography

David McKie

David McKie is an Ottawa-based, award-winning journalist and an author who has been with the CBC for 19 years. In researching topics such as health and safety, he has become increasingly dependent on computer-assisted investigative reporting techniques, using the Internet to find sources, background material, and using spreadsheets and database managers to organize information and to produce story ideas. David is now with the CBC's investigative unit.

To get an idea of the investigative stories he has researched, written and broadcast, please go to the following links: Faint Warning , Prescribed to Death , Dying for a Job and Out of Synch, Beaten Down: Fear and Violence in Canada's Nursing Homes and Off-Limits. Faint Warning was a finalist for the 2004 Michener award, winner of the 2004 RTNDA award for best investigative report, and winner the Canadian Association of Journalists' 2004 computer-assisted reporting (CAR) award and the overall CAJ award for best investigative series. Faint Warning won the Service Journalism category for the 2004 Online News Association. The follow-up series, Prescribed to Death, that ran in 2005 was also a big award winner. The series won the CAJ's 2006 CAR award, the Open Radio News Award and, for the second year in a row, the overall award. The series also won the 2006 CNA ( Canadian Nurses Association ) & CMA ( Canadian Medical Association ) Media Awards for Excellence in Health Reporting and the American-based IRE (Investigative Reporters and Editors) award in the radio category. Dying for a Job won the 2007 Excellence in Health Reporting from the Canadian Medical Associationa and the Canadian Nurses' Association. In, Beaten Down: Fear and violence in Canada's Nursing Homes, David examined the national problem of violence in Canadian long-term care facilities. That was followed that up with Off-Limits, an investigation into doctors who continue to prescribe atypical anti-psychotics to seniors despite Health Canada warnings about increased risk of heart attack, stroke -- and death. He's working with The Canadian Press and The Toronto Star on Tasers and food safety , respectively. And for the taser series, David and Jim Bronskill were part of the large team that earned the 2008 Michener Award.

David edits a magazine for the Canadian Association of Journalists called Media, which you can find at: Media magazine And he maintains a website that keeps track of access-to-information requests that are made to federal departments, agencies and Crown corporations. The CAIRS site, which used to be maintained by professor Alasdair Roberts, has become a valuable tool for journalists. As you'll see from the syllabus to which we'll frequently refer, David teaches a research methods class to masters students at Carleton.

David obtained a Master of Journalism degree from Carleton University in the summer of 2001. One of the areas he researched was the evolution of computer-assisted, investigative reporting in Canada and the United States. And he is a co-author of Digging Deeper, a Canadian textbook on investigative research techniques.You can order it by visiting Amazon.ca. He also co-authored a second textbook, Computer-Assisted Reporting: A Comprehensive Primer.